Quiddage Writing

9/12/10
I have done well in Quiddage. Buying soup is quite good (with bread). Getting close to having 40 minutes retirement without business money. Our business the Poolstarz hasn't been the best but still has earned me enough to get 40 minutes. My jobs have included bank manager,accountant, technician, time keeper and QZ times editor.
I earn the most snidges for payslips.

Free Writing

The Ugly Beast.

The ugly beast is all red and white.
He likes coke and Sprite.
Ever seen purple teeth?
In a mouth. With a orange tongue?
"Furry beast up five trees like a snake can you play with me?"
"Nah!"

Athletics Writing

Clap! The hurdle race starts! I start in third. On the first hurdle I jump too high. I slow down too much. At the second hurdle I jump well. but not well enough. On the third hurdle I jump perfectly and gain speed.

I start to catch up to graceon and Hadley. I can see the finish line more easily. With about two metres to go I catch up to graceon. Yeah! I beat him by about 5 centimetres!

Writing dialogue

WALT: Write using dialogue.

"AAHHH do I have to jump?" asked Jed horrified.

"If you want to be brave," Samuel replied.
"What's down there again?"
"A pool of ladybugs!"
"Can I jump yet ? I've been on one toe for half an hour now," Jed said tiredly.
"You could have jumped half an hour ago," laughed Samuel.
“Could have told me that,”
“So you jumping yet?”
“Let’s get it over and done with,”
“Here I go,” Jed yells

My Time at Riverdale

I've experienced camps and explorers. Sports too. Yes my hockey team should have won last year. That doesn't matter. The quiddage and Athletics are some really fun events I've done. Some of the teachers I've had have been great. (yes you Tee Cee). You'll never want to leave Riverdale, all your friends and teachers.

free writing

15.10.10
Hadleys pi is today. It'll be yummy. He's brought along fudge because his pi's on which flavour of fudge is best. The flavors are licorice and pineapple lumps. The licorice won so he's bringing that along. I liked the pineapple lumps best. They didn't win though. Which is stink. I think hadleys favourite was pineapple lumps.

W.A.L.T:put it together. production

Plan: Halloween dance, not fun, embarrassment, weird, jump jam, scary face, back rows, crazy, scary ripped shirts, Blood red paint, funny feeling, nervousness, weird feelings.


We are doing the Halloween jump jam dance and we have to have silly scary faces like you're a malicious monster. On stage you're really apprehensive in front of 800 people. Our costumes are weird because they are all different. We have to supply our own. On stage all you can do is do the dance and do it well.The lights are really bright and you have to look up and at them. The great green and big blue lights are very annoying and make you feel weird. Big Bat arms and hop running. What weird stuff.


A not so fun bit is the green room. The huge room equals 3 other classes 12,4 and 3. we had to share in a huge room with no separate areas. Everyones talking and the noise is deafening. it's happening because everyones trying to talk over everyone.

When we go to get on stage there is still two dances before we start.

20/9/10 W.A.L.T: put it all together

My Plan.

Lightning,bed,birthday,friends,wind,rain,shadow,fright,dark,1:00 am,loud,person looking round,trees blowing in the fast wind,street lights flashing shadows on the street, wind bouncing off the road.


Pitter Patter Pitter Patter. friends at a party. Rain bouncing off the streets and roofs. wind whipping the trees. Pitter Patter. Rain wont stop. Its almost going forwards instead of down. The street lights destroy the blackness as dark as the tigers stripe. The Shadows are like knives reaching. You cant see out. the windows, Fogged. Flash,Fright. A huge Strip of light tears the darkness. reaching through the window making the splotched rain marks show in the light. We all look out the window. A shape like a person. moving. Camera. Maybe. all black lives across the road, turbo too. not so fun at 1'o clock. everyone of us staring waiting for the face. the windows fog annihilates the wiping motion of our arms. it comes back. it goes. The Rains sound on the roof is horrible and the winds still tearing the trees. Mum comes in. we're quiet.

Making boring writing come to life

W.A.L.T. Make tired writing come to life.


A hot dog thats red with lots of mustard.

1.there's a hot dog that's as red as the metallic paint of a car. mustard covers him with a quick style.
2.There's a hot dog that's going blam boom kapowwy attack charge. He's got mustard yellow bright yellow and his sausage is a missile.
3.A hot dog with a stupidly unintellengent look with his red mustard and yellow sausage.
4.A heated hated hallucinated hot dog doing his fitness and making his mustard red.
5.A Crazy cave hot doodle dog that's has mustard and tomato sauce racing stripes with a super duper sonic blue turbo jet sausage
6.A super spunky hot dog that's got red raking racing sausage.

Free Writing 18/8/10

A hot dog thats red with lots of musturd.

a million dollar bill in a museum that gets stolen from it by a roober who wears white with blue stripes.

the worls explodes from a drill goin ginto the core of the earth and people live on mars in little bubbles until earth is suitable to live on.

Big cars that have laser guns amd can talk and can aim and fire an that dont need a driver.

the aliens of kalsckerssdaa come and kil the earth laser guns kil their language means love and cuddles.

a fire in london that set thing on fire and makes them explode and then the gets bigegre and then the firemen save the day.

Puppet pals in tickle wars

By Alan Kirk

Treeosaur the viking dinosaur(viking dinosaur)
Sam snake(snake named Sam)
Crazy Chaz(crazy viking)
Tommy gangster(cool gangster)

scene:

Island of Sillysaurus.

treeosaur and crazy Chaz are

walking along.

Sam snake and tommy are hiding.

shrub forest of trees on the left side.

.

Treeosaur:(walking along with Crazy Chaz) Hi crazy Chaz. How are you today?

Crazy Chaz:(still walking along with Treeosaur) oh ka rama zed cheese.

Treeosaur:(stopping with crazy Chaz) Does it mean cheesy snake or snake.

Crazy Chaz: OH KA RAMA ZED CHEESE.

Treeosaur: its a snake. run away.

Crazy Chaz:(tugging on treeosaur) SAM,SAM treeosaur SAM

Treeosaur:(Sam appearing) Oh its you Sam

Sam:(running away) I'm running away from tommy

Treeosaur:(running away)Who is tommy?

Sam:(tommy appearing) Ah tommy (Sam running away off view)

Tommy:(looking around) Have you seen Sam? we've been playing tickle wars.

Treeosaur:Can we play too.

Tommy:(sam walking into view)After we find sam.

Sam: Let the tickle wars begin.

Everyone:(coming together)This is really fun.

treeosaur puppet description

His name is treeosaur the viking dinosaur. he likes war with sillysaurs and dinodings. treeosaur doesn't like fire or ice or bad or nice. he wants to hug everything to death with his viking trees. He smiles like a mad-man. pine trees grow on his spine like wet warrior weeds. his one eye is surrounded by wire and pokes out like a frogs eye. his main hobby is setting fire to sillysaur huts with pictodragon poo the most flammable thing the world has ever known fire is banned in america and india and australia and every other place that doesn't exsist (in his world). his brain wobbles like the oko ocean. he has helmet made especially pointy for his trees and one to help his eye see. treeosaur has mood swings from grouchy to goody.

by Alan.

The art of describing

21/6/10

1. Zack walked through the green leafy bush with his gun ready to fire. The leaves under his wide heavy feet on the ground were crackling like fire burning their prey.

2. Zack was hauling his latest catch back home. The rabbits were weighing him down pushing his feet into the leaves making them fall to his might.

Book Sale aristotles nostril

Voice character

11/6/10
W.A.L.T: Describe- with VOICE
My alien is a tiny 1 cm sphere. He has a tail 2 cm long with fire on the tip. he moves by farting. When he does this the fire on his tail bursts out and propels him. His name is bulkgolia and he lives in the 2589 colony. He has 50 eyes all 1mm times 1mm and they pop every 50 seconds like a bomb and he grows new ones in 2 minutes so most of the time he is blind with no eyes. Bulkgolia is normally 1000 times his sphere size because he is addicted to chocolate. He is furry and when he is massive there are huge bald spots on him. Bulkgolias colony is in the destroyia-killa group. They have DK on them and the writings really fat. He is normally feasting on the chocolate galaxy of H8TPNTS. He is really rich and wears a chocolate coat that can expand. He has legs that are tiny with sharp claws on the end. His arms are big and muscular with blunt claws. 2589 is on his head and has long black girly hair. He is red and green. his eyes are white. Bulkgoia has no ears. His mouth is tiny.

By Alan

Book sale Worry warts

Autumn

Autumn is cold like a fridge. You have to wrap up to keep warm. leaves fall everywhere. Its like roads are overflowing with leaves. If you clean them all up tomorrow there going to be back. The air is fresh though cleaning the sky's. You see a whirl of red, green, orange, yellow and brown. it looks like a tornado but it's only a tree and its leaves. you look up and the trees are sticks and branches. CRUNCH! The leaves are like 1 cm thick bridge crumbling under 1000kg.

The Amazing Race

12/5/10
W.A.L.T describe with voice.
Every day every morning. The most dreadful run happens. We have ten minutes to do as many laps as we can. Corbin and I were running. 4th lap, 4th lap. TRIP! Corbin fell over. His foot had twisted out. COUGH! another one. Ouch. these coughs felt like my chest is getting ripped open by a knife. I did my 4th lap. I was round the other side of the field. STOP! NOOO. half a lap to go.

Mrs Walker

11/5/10
WALT: describe-with voice
Mrs Walker is like a bouncy baboony basketball.
shes so fit she can beat a panther. Mrs walker can beat a rhinoceros in a weightlifting competition. Mrs Walkers nails are like a dog who hasn't had them cut for the last 10 years. She does the chicken dance like a chicken, that's how good she is.

Megalodon Adventures

The Megalodon shark was the most ferocious fish in the sea. Unfortunely ones here in the waters of New Zealand. That's why marine reserves have mysteriously been cleaned of all life. The megalodons fin is so big its like a rock in the water. A moving rock. Boats are destroyed by the fin slicing the boat in two just like siccors chopping paper. The shark comes back for another go. On the second run its job is to devour the the people. It takes them whole. We were out on the water in our new turbo 2000 jetboat. mt maunganui waters can be dangerous. Fishing for a decent sized fish was going to be hard with a storm coming. We were looking for 30cm long fish but instead we got a 18 metre long shark. Far too long to be a great white. It had to be prehistoric. It's the carchadon megaladon. It came towards fin like a rock. SPLASH!! SMASH, CRASH!! "What happened?" "The boat hit a rock" "can't of. It is in half" "good thing were wearing our hiwi life jackets." "we have to get out of here" "Were's the life raft" " In my hands. Come over here" "inflate it" " Allready have" "Hop in" "Where are we going?" "Home". The shark was coming again! Were are in the raft, we see the fin. Shhhh. The fin was splashing about. I fire the harpoon "SHOT!" I hit the fuel tank of the boat. It was in the sharks mouth. It blew the shark to bits. The blast was so big you could see it from the shore. "How do we get back?" "Helicopter". There was a helicopter in the distance. "Home at last".

Kalackazooey

26.4.10

Hi my names Kalackazooey, I'm from Kaleshmikoz and I'm 10...million. You may think I'm alien! I'm a humelian(pronounced Hume-lian).

27.4.10

Humelians evolved from the nucs bomb that went off 10 million years ago. only a few normal humans existed after that, 10 or so now there is twenty thousand. our people have moved on. we found that space ships could easily be made so we went to Kaleshmikoz. It's the only other inhabitable planet in the universe since the aliens died out. we had peace and harmony here until kilgav decided to start a war. People joined peacgav's side and all of a sudden kilgav had no one. kilgav was the universes top scientist. He figured out how to make a destructor suit with a10k shield generator, laser bomb missiles designed to kill shields with the laser blast and bust the generator with the bomb terminating the shield. however he needed to travel to earth to get the equipment and wasn't sure how the humans would take him friend or foe? He took the best spaceship Kaleshmikoz had. The tackzer 5.

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