Writing dialogue

WALT: Write using dialogue.

"AAHHH do I have to jump?" asked Jed horrified.

"If you want to be brave," Samuel replied.
"What's down there again?"
"A pool of ladybugs!"
"Can I jump yet ? I've been on one toe for half an hour now," Jed said tiredly.
"You could have jumped half an hour ago," laughed Samuel.
“Could have told me that,”
“So you jumping yet?”
“Let’s get it over and done with,”
“Here I go,” Jed yells

My Time at Riverdale

I've experienced camps and explorers. Sports too. Yes my hockey team should have won last year. That doesn't matter. The quiddage and Athletics are some really fun events I've done. Some of the teachers I've had have been great. (yes you Tee Cee). You'll never want to leave Riverdale, all your friends and teachers.